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Author Name: FreeJam 5 Comments
Date Added: June 23, 2004 07:06:48 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Bleeding
Crimson raindrops
Splash in the sink,
Just like they did
When I was a child.

History repeats they say,
And it's all the same,
Yet somehow it's different;
This time it's on purpose.

And it all feels wrong,
It's only blood flowing,
Only my life pours out,
Inside it still remains.

I need a deeper cut
To drain this torpor dry,
Stain the waters pink
With the darkness inside.

Oh the lonesome moon,
Dearest friend of mine,
Grant me one final sin:
A way to bleed within.
Author's Notes:
Actually can't stand flowing blood, freaks me out, this one just came with the 1st line and went from there, the muse has a weird sense of humour I tell you ;)
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeRamona Thompson on April 29, 2009 06:10:35 PM Report
Quite moving.

 

Keep listening to that strange muse of yours. He or she is gonna take you to great places if you let 'em.

 

R

Comment By: Freenoah count on July 19, 2004 10:10:04 PM Report
Usually, once it gets icky I bail out, only the good ones can hold me to the last line, which in this case was powerful.
Comment By: FreeAndrea D. Carlon on June 24, 2004 09:35:49 PM Report
Great poem, once again. You do such a marvelous job. :-)

-Andrea-
aka Andy
Comment By: FreeBritney on June 23, 2004 12:59:09 PM Report
this is really good
Comment By: Freelamzy on June 23, 2004 08:38:33 AM Report
This is a great poem, something eerily beautiful about it, great write.




 


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