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Author Name: PremiumVIZUALENSEMBLE 15 Comments
Date Added: June 26, 2004 07:06:36 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Last night as I lay sleeping,
two angels came to me, a young boy
and girl, as beautiful as can be.
She brushed my hair back from my face,
he held my hand and together they sang "Amazing Grace."

Her sweet soft voice, his soft
sparkling eyes, I knew right away
who they were, it was no surpirse.
The little girl and boy I knew was
sent my way, my tears fell hard as
I pulled them close, held them tight
and sang along.

I felt his presence as I held these
two precious children so tight, for
there around them was his guiding
light. The little girl spoke, and
the chills they came, she looked into
my eyes, and said, "for your life,
will never be the same."

The little boy, he wore such a
beautiful smile, he looked at me and
he said "I am his child." "You see, we
come to ask, that you watch over our Dad.
"I pulled them even closer and held them
ever so tight. Your little angels, came
to visit me last night.

They spoke of how they watch over you,
they see your sadness and they hear
your prayers too. The little girl,
well she really stole my heart, as she
sang so softly, sang from her precious

The little boy stood there holding his
sisters little hand so tight God sent
your angel's to me, in the middle of the
night. I made them a promise to watch
over you, to bring you happiness, as,
thats what they ask me to do.

They told me how they miss you, but
they understand too, that one day once
again you will hold them close, like
you use to do. They will wait for
that day, then they can sing to you,
your little angel's, just watching
over you.

Yes, your little girl and boy, so
precious they are, they sang their
hearts out, the most beautiful by far.
They hold to your hand, they are
forever in your heart, your little
angels, they touched my heart.

June 26, 2004

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Comment By: FreeRonald Hamilton on July 11, 2004 03:45:55 PM Report
much deserving of the ward you have reeived
Comment By: PremiumKeith Overstreet on July 11, 2004 11:17:42 AM Report
Penny, this is beautiful! And very deserving of this great award. Heartfelt and moving. David is a lucky fella! Congrats!!!!!
Comment By: Freenanette on July 9, 2004 06:33:57 PM Report
Congratulations on a well deserved award!! Well anyhow CONGRATULATIONS, my friend..
Comment By: FreeBOB on July 8, 2004 08:35:17 PM Report
Beautiful piece of poetry, more like a melody, so touching, so feeling.
Well deserves your award :) Bob
Comment By: FreeWilliam R. Sullens on July 8, 2004 01:59:59 PM Report
Hi Penny:
A beautiful and enchanting poem. A wonderful poem receiving a well deserved Blue Ribbon. Thank you. Bill
Comment By: FreeMelissa on July 8, 2004 12:48:24 PM Report
Your words are always so beautiful and filled with caring. This is the most beautiful masterpiece I have read today. Congratulations on the well deserved award.
Comment By: Freejoia on July 6, 2004 03:48:52 PM Report
A most beautiful poem, giving solace to many. A good cry can clense, a good poem can redeem those who read it. Thank you and congratulations, joia
Comment By: FreeJenny Gane on July 6, 2004 01:27:34 PM Report
sweeter then sweet.that's the only way to describe this poem.
Comment By: FreeRichard Johnson on July 5, 2004 09:21:51 PM Report
This is a beautiful write Penny. Congratulations on the blue ribbon.
Thunder Wolf
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on July 5, 2004 12:08:26 PM Report
Dear, dear Penny~!
Whenever one taps upon a post of yours, they are assured of a masterpiece that will be filled with beautiful work~! ALL of your talented work is savored by all at the Site, and your inspiration to all of us is a GIFT~!! Penny, your insight to the general population that are Earthbound, is keen-----And, the Ethereal beings that come to you in Visions and Dreams, make you one of the most beloved poetesses that I have been privy to meet~ Your tremendous caring and loving is always bursting from your writes---EACH and EVERY one~!
I am proud to call you a friend, and I am proud to congratulate you on this excellent write and its presentation~
In Love and Light----Margaret, the bag lady, who values the talent of Penny
Comment By: FreeGay Johnson on July 5, 2004 04:21:42 AM Report
Congratulations on the blue ribbon. A wonderful write.
Gentle Dove
Comment By: Freenanette on June 28, 2004 01:16:03 PM Report
You have inspired many with your beautiful talents.. I thank you for sharing your heart so widely.. What can I say about your work, but it is amazing and graceful, so to me it's a wonderful display that they came singing amazing grace, just for you.. Thank you so very, much my friend...Much joy you have given to me..
Thank you
Comment By: FreeDarkness Rides This Night on June 27, 2004 11:04:50 AM Report
Your pen is limitless for the ink of your talent flows and flows..! A most beautiful poem my dear friend Penny..!
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 26, 2004 09:52:05 PM Report
Comment By: FreeGay Johnson on June 26, 2004 04:07:27 PM Report
Penny, this is the most amazing write I have ever read. You have a beautiful soul that touches my heart.
Gentle Dove


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