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Author Name: PremiumPoetrydad1 12 Comments
Date Added: July 02, 2004 21:07:07 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Friendship Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Loyalty - a Sedoka-
What of loyalty?
I want to be true to you.
It will benefit us both.

When you grieve, I'm sad.
When you're gone, I long for you.
Without you I am empty. 
Author's Notes:
I have been experimenting with different forms of poetry. Hope you enjoy.
---Poetrydad--- 
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Comments:
Comment By: FreePia Andersson on April 7, 2005 06:07:02 PM Report
Beauty, integrity, style and tenderness
6 lines
excellent poetry !!! Wishing you a joyful day, Pia
Comment By: FreePia Andersson on April 7, 2005 06:03:22 PM Report

Comment By: FreeSue Tancheff on July 25, 2004 10:33:57 PM Report
Great writing Bruce.

Take care.......Sue
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on July 14, 2004 04:36:37 PM Report
Thank you for experimenting, as we the reader, reap the benefit....Very nicely done...
The Bag Lady...who needs to study style
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 13, 2004 08:14:19 PM Report
BRUCE,
NOW THIS IS WONDERFUL!! YOU HAVE GREAT TALENT!! ALWAYS SHE
Comment By: FreeGlata on July 7, 2004 11:10:32 AM Report
This is great, Bruce! Keep experimenting...it is working very nicely!

Glata
Comment By: FreeJennifer on July 7, 2004 10:41:00 AM Report
I may not be familuar, with this type of poetry, but I understand the meaning, and it's awesome. I assure you I will do my homework! This is really nice!
Jen
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on July 5, 2004 10:31:20 PM Report
An excellent sedoka, Bruce. Good work. ML
Comment By: TrialAnn on July 3, 2004 09:56:55 AM Report
Well done Bruce. Nicely crafted on all accounts.
Comment By: FreeGay Johnson on July 2, 2004 11:59:32 PM Report
This is a very cool write.
Gentle Dove
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on July 2, 2004 11:59:29 PM Report
It is lovely, no matter the form
from which it is written....I think
that trying new venues is challenging, and I commend you for trying them...
Guess I shall work on that some day..
Margaret..the bag lady...
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on July 2, 2004 10:08:28 PM Report
Lovely work Bruce...great content here!

~Barbara~




 


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