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Author Name: FreeKhivar 11 Comments
Date Added: May 13, 2003 19:05:56 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Blademaster
He might have been born with a sword in his hand No sound he makes as his feet walk the sand A world-weary traveler old 'fore his time Trudging along in the mud and the grime Faithless and friendless, all trust in his sword Eyes like a fiend, his body scar-scored Learning by action and instinct alone His soul has been frozen, cold as a stone No one can touch him, none is his match Where others bleed crimson he takes not a scratch He flows through the battles like swift dream of death His enemies fall ere they can draw breath He dreams without knowing and seeks 'gainst his will One whom perhaps even he cannot kill It is this that he follows as his feet seek the path To his cold wooden coffin and short epitaph Thus he seeks contest and no end to strife Til one day his guard falls and steel takes his life
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Dedicated to Garet Jax...
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeJess on August 22, 2004 10:19:02 AM Report
Fantastic. Best I have read yet.
Comment By: Freejoia on May 3, 2004 05:29:51 PM Report
Tho last year's award, it was rightly given, and I am glad you have let it see the light of today. I have enjoyed reading your vivid poetry. joia
Comment By: FreeZaschere Aye Earthan on October 22, 2003 05:43:00 PM Report
Definatly goes to my faves

Comment By: Freejudy on October 8, 2003 03:32:16 PM Report
Wonderful, an excellent write, so descriptive.

Judy :o)
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on October 6, 2003 06:15:10 PM Report
Very well written.
Comment By: FreeAlec Wilson on October 6, 2003 05:21:44 PM Report
Well crafted!
Comment By: FreeT. G. T on October 6, 2003 12:31:12 AM Report
Great poem
T.Tsaimis
Comment By: FreeRyan Meckes on October 5, 2003 10:28:36 PM Report
damn...this was kool...loved the title as well...very worthy of the award it has received...excellent.
Comment By: FreeJason Brown on September 13, 2003 04:08:35 PM Report
Great Mike
Jason Brown
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 26, 2003 06:20:26 PM Report
THIS IS REALLY QUITE GOOD!!KEEP WRITING!
Comment By: FreeTL on May 15, 2003 01:01:41 PM Report
A vivid, descriptive poem. Love how you describe and yet don't loose the flow.
Keep it up!





 


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