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Author Name: Freemajik1213 17 Comments
Date Added: May 14, 2003 20:05:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Color Wheel
Oh, there he goes

The violently oppressed one

Lost in a sea of sorrow

Violence seems to be the only way to effect change

Poor, poor, soldier

Speaks monosyllabically

Chrome





Oh, there she goes

Ms. Popularity

Perfect hair, perfect timing, head made drunk with cortex

Little serendipity

Ms. Pretty-in-

Pink



Mr. Crow

Sandy Saliva

Wears a trench coat

Impossible to befriend

Unkempt, malodorous, coarse

Rugged

Stone



Ah, who art thou?

Little rambunctious one

Perky little ears, just raring to go?

Attention Deficit

Red



Miss Chameleon

But her tongue is far too shallow to ever attain that shade of--

Mahogany



Mr. Catastrophe, I presume

Limelight giver

Putrid Heart

Hopeless Cause

Settle upon the abyss, lost one

Blue stained black





And what have we here?

Stolen spotlight

Lives under pseudonyms

Cradled by the lucrative hand

The strongest enemy he faces is himself

Heart of Diamond

Mind of scrambled eggs

Destination undesired

Like blowing steam into space

Gold digger, reckless spy

Refuses to abandon the pursuit of his dreams

Like all men, has a weakness: Desire for false sympathy

An outlaw star

Do not overlook this one

He is free to break the chains of fate that bind him

And the color?

The color?

...
Author's Notes:
our world is like a color wheel.  But what happens when one of us doesn't fit?
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAmanda on May 13, 2004 11:16:26 AM Report
wonderfully written i loved it
Comment By: FreeLil pumpkin on January 26, 2004 11:41:11 AM Report
Very orginal,I enjoyed it immensely.I love the style you write.
Comment By: FreeMarinaJoann on January 26, 2004 03:44:01 AM Report
I am sure you know this is brilliant...so its purpose here must be for praise...which is freely and rightly given. sperate from the praise thank you for sharing.
Marina
Comment By: FreeStephen Owen AKA Passion Hawk on December 29, 2003 11:58:03 AM Report
brilliant drew,like the style and the flow mate..steve
Comment By: FreeStephen Owen AKA Passion Hawk on December 29, 2003 11:58:01 AM Report
brilliant drew,like the style and the flow mate..steve
Comment By: FreeBelle on October 22, 2003 12:17:45 AM Report
I love it! ^^
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on October 10, 2003 06:30:52 AM Report
Drew, very well written.
Comment By: FreeGoths Are Hot on September 25, 2003 08:13:33 PM Report
AWESOME! that is so kewl, i like the "pretty in pink line", that weaved in well! well done babe!

Mo
Comment By: Freerenee on September 20, 2003 12:57:11 AM Report
sexy; nice work
Comment By: FreeGeorgia on September 12, 2003 04:34:52 PM Report
Hmm what can I say that's others have not?.. Great poems.. You're an amazing writer, truly:)

Georgia
Comment By: FreeKelly on August 20, 2003 12:49:21 PM Report
-Mr.Popularity. (j/k)...Great Poem. :)
Comment By: FreeAmanda W on August 20, 2003 12:06:28 AM Report
You have quite a fan club and understandably so. Your an amazing writer and 17yrs. old Wow! Congrats. on the award.
Lol Amanda W
Comment By: FreeAlyse on August 10, 2003 10:56:10 PM Report
awesome poem drew... you really got some talent! Take care.
Comment By: FreeCrystal Iannacone on August 4, 2003 10:23:05 AM Report
OMG!!!!! I didn't realize you knew my family! Small world! lol
Drew, you are a character but at 17, can you really be so cynical?
If you keep them coming . . . I'll keep them worn out for you!
Comment By: FreeJERRY WILSON on July 24, 2003 12:52:09 PM Report
so many big words ...good write..
wbpoet
Comment By: FreeVictoria on May 15, 2003 06:51:44 PM Report
Very orginal. Good work
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 15, 2003 04:26:09 PM Report
VERY BEAUTIFUL!!




 


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