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Author Name: Freedyoung 6 Comments
Date Added: July 19, 2004 10:07:56 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Your House
Lord, your house is beautiful.
Light through stained-glass windows
Bathes old wooden pews in hues
Of purple, orange, and rose.
The roof rises above like a great bird
Taking wing to your side.
The smell of generations settles on my nose
And brings me back to a childhood.
Memories of vacation bible school
Sweetly play behind my closed eyes.
Deep red pew cushions, velvety and soft
Invite me to stay.
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July 2004
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Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on April 13, 2007 02:50:49 AM Report
Okay...where did those comfy velvety cushions come from. The pews I remember were all just wood. ((end, nothing more)) *smiles* This is very soft and delicate Dori, a very special visual treat. "The smell of generations settles on my nose"...oh how true this is! How many times a certain scent takes me back...I can realte to this. Vacation bible school...now there is something that hasn't come to mind in a long, long time. "The roof rises above like a great bird
Taking wing to your side"...I loved this simile. Thank you for sharing this with us.

 

It is certainly no mystery why this poem has won a FP award. *smiles* Congratulations!

 

~Barbara~

Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on April 9, 2007 10:12:01 PM Report
Just lovely...filled me with such peace and brought me back to some of my own memories of faith and sanctuary. Congrats on the award.

~Cindy

Comment By: TrialAnn on April 9, 2007 09:55:46 PM Report
Congratulations Dori. Well done!


Comment By: AdminRichardM on April 9, 2007 07:37:41 PM Report
A beautiful write, truly. Congratulations!
Rich

Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on April 9, 2007 07:03:08 PM Report
Dori:  great write and very deserving of the Feature Poem Award.

 

Lady D

Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on July 19, 2004 11:12:25 AM Report
How wonderful to have you back at work. I've missed your magic; your fantastic phrasing, your unerring choice of words, your heartfelt sentiments, your very presence. Don't go away again, Dori. I need your inspiration. This is perfect in every way. ML




 


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