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Author Name: FreeWolf 4 Comments
Date Added: July 20, 2004 01:07:10 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~!x!Small, Frozen Farm Pond!x!~
Within that small, frozen farm pond deeply, lies the body of a girl, deep beyond, the edge of the pondís snowy bank and whoís brutal day, sank.. ..along with her But now finally the answer has been told, and so the brutal day grazes the air again By the monster, who made hers and many otherís hearts quake at least until he finally met his doom, and that by the hands of that very girl lying deeply, below that small farm pond, She who is now looking quite dimmer rises from the pond and raises her head to the bright, red sun and shivers Now, the monster, her killer waits for her arrival, near the farm house close by for which he slaughtered her existence, & where his reign of causing fear was ended & soon forgotten. And so he waits, & waits until finally, the girlís ghostly spirit appears, floating delicately toward him, He can see that she still has his favorite ax dangling from the back of her mangled head. Then within little time, he twists up in a furious rage, bolts straight toward her but then stops.! Now, they are Face to Face He stares at her, then makes a swipe at her, with his hand but all of a sudden stops and stops for good. He just continues to stare at her, he wants to do what he did a year ago but, he cannot seem to finish his move.. Anger fills up his thoughts and he does not know what is wrong Then something creeps into his mind and then he thinks *that maybe what he really wants is to just lie forever with her* within that frozen farm pond. Or is that so??
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeKaren Redd on July 22, 2004 07:24:03 AM Report
Cool! That's a surprise!! ... her magled head... ooooh!!! You write a good creepy poem!!!! Karen
Comment By: FreeKeri on July 21, 2004 01:43:37 PM Report
Mark,

Very interesting. It's got the same twisted Markness, yet it's different. I can't suggest anything to make it better. Excellent write. *smiles*

~Keri~
Comment By: FreeJessica Erin on July 20, 2004 02:08:01 AM Report
LMAO... hmmm.. unexpected concept of a poem. lol. I really like this Mark. Awesome write. =)

*~Silver~*
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on July 20, 2004 01:27:42 AM Report
REALLY ENJOYED THIS MY FRIEND..
LATER SHE




 


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