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Author Name: Freemestupchick 3 Comments
Date Added: July 26, 2004 03:07:42 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~Until I'm Home~
I feel lost in this place everyone said it would be worth it but i just feel misplaced sitting here in this corner the walls of this room fold and bend sinking me in this whole deeper and deeper as i think of home I'm seeing trew the smoke its all just an illusion now I'm licking my wounds but it only seem to get worse Everytime i try to grab some air all there seems to be is despair cant seem to wake from this nigthmare it will never be over This pain from deep within my soul It burns like venom in the blood I know I'm not alone but my soul wont live until I'm home...
Author's Notes:
i miss my home... i miss my colombia... i miss my clouds my rain my dark sky my mountains...i hate it here and all the thigns they said were lies...i do lvoe my friends but there is nuthin left for me here.. call it homesick call wat you will but i have to go back... comments on this poem please
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Comment By: FreeMeghan on February 23, 2005 01:37:53 PM Report
This is a wonderful piece, but I'm sorry you miss your home.
Comment By: Freestef on July 27, 2004 04:15:36 AM Report
o i get it now. im sry hun, u should go back there for like a summer or somethin if u miss it that much. or go back to live if u want. i would miss u so much but like sami said, i would be happy cuz u would be happy. it seems like thats wut u truely want. i say go for it. when we get our licenses we will have a road trip and all go there with ya!!!!!!! woohoo!! lol. i made u smile huh? i hope i did lol. neways ill let u go now. it really is a good poem, i like. (OOOO i hear thunder!!!! YAY ME GO WATCH) bye hun
*~*sTeFaNi*~*
Comment By: FreeSami on July 27, 2004 12:21:35 AM Report
it's good! and u deserve to go back to Columbia!!! I will miss you greatly, but I will be glad cuz you will be HAPPY! keep writing good poems Jess! love ya!
~*~Sami~*~




 


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