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Author Name: Freerinky_d 7 Comments
Date Added: July 27, 2004 18:07:04 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~Shattered Angel~
He's a shattered Angel With Lifeless wings All he wants, Is to be freed. Freed from A broken Home If you look close The scars, they show. With every forceful punch, And evert harsh strike They take him more away from life. He's bound, cold, and naked on the floor, Praying to God to help him soar. With another blow to the head, His wings repaired, he has fled. He's a Beautiful Angel With great white wings He's Home now, Always free.
Author's Notes:
ummm..I just started thinking about all the people that have been abused.. and i wrote this in 5 minutes so its not very good..
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSophie on April 8, 2010 07:27:51 PM Report
really emotional even though its short. it shows how people who are abused want nothing more than to be realeased even if it means death it seems better to them than the life they are living now. well done :)
Comment By: FreeKatie on March 26, 2010 06:12:38 PM Report
omg!!! this is amazing!!!! u put soo much emotion into it.
Comment By: FreeJordan on July 31, 2005 04:21:26 PM Report
I love ur poem, to me it talks about kids who just get beat up because they're not "cool" enough.

Comment By: FreeSherene on February 26, 2005 02:35:15 PM Report
beautiful poem

Sherene
Comment By: FreeCarolina on September 17, 2004 09:59:13 PM Report
I think this is really great because its creative and different from most poems. Im adding it to my favorites =]
Comment By: FreeS on July 28, 2004 12:37:00 AM Report
very nice
Comment By: FreeLance Binkley on July 27, 2004 07:20:39 PM Report
I thought it was good




 


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