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Author Name: FreeNatversion1 4 Comments
Date Added: August 09, 2004 12:08:18 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Beach
Upon a beach with a red rose in hand



I gently bleed into the sand



Thorns and skin now locked in tight



I beg you Lord end this tonight







I am your child but I am alone



Please let me sit beside your throne



My blood weeps my internal tears



I’ve lost myself but found my fears







The air is dark but the moon is bright



There is no time better than tonight







The ocean waves roll in to greet me



Lapping cries come from the sea







I crave the peace to set me free



The eternal quiet to let me be







But no voice replies to me



The beach as quiet as can it be







My rant and rave is out the way







I leave the beach for another day



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Comments:
Comment By: FreeKate on November 9, 2004 04:34:05 AM Report
Perfect expression on how alone someone can feel. I think we all know this feeling at some point in our lives.
Excellent poem,
Peach
Comment By: on August 10, 2004 12:07:41 AM Report
I live near the ocean and write about it all the time it does sooth ones soul no matter what I belive it's the sounds of the waves and the peacefulness it brings. LauralG
Comment By: FreeAnya den Teuling on August 9, 2004 04:49:42 PM Report
I can pciture it, the loneliness, the fears, the need to call to heaven for answers. Great write.
Cat

Comment By: FreeBrittany on August 9, 2004 02:30:04 PM Report
this is good




 


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