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Author Name: Freewildhorse 16 Comments
Date Added: August 12, 2004 22:08:36 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~Restore Elegance~
She was like a old Victorian home, in need of repairs. Once with beauty in a southerly style, and touch of elegance. Her walls filled with memorys, of day's surpassed. Many foot step's have swept, across these worn floors. Leaving there worried paths, of lonely wondering nights. Storms that had characterized her beauty. Windows broken, by marriages of heartaches. Her support weakened, and infirm, By hard times, and the changing of the winds. Then he came along... To restore her beauty, and unwrap her elegance. Mend her broken heartaches, and close the window on her pain. Gave her support, and calm the fury of the wind Swept her nights with, passion, and romance...
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Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on October 15, 2005 07:16:25 AM Report
Such a pretty piece.
Congratulations on the award.
I loved the comparions to the old house, how time ages and changes homes and people.
Wonderful ideas expressed here. ~Pam
Comment By: FreeKarl Berry on September 16, 2005 10:14:17 AM Report
hello, without hard times the wind would not blow...
With change anything can happen!...
Beautyful thoughts....Patch...!
Comment By: FreeJoy on September 14, 2005 10:16:38 PM Report
WOW! Definetly worth the award... and I applaud you! A thrilling write! Good luck!
Comment By: Freemangallel on August 21, 2004 11:54:11 AM Report
This is one of my favourite poems Jennifer, it's truely a masterpiece. The imagery works so well that I felt almost as though I was watching the poem play out rather than reading :) Fantastic and congratulations on the well deserved award
Comment By: FreeWith pain comes strength on August 20, 2004 05:32:48 AM Report
A lovely write
Congrats on the award
Nik
Comment By: FreeSue Tancheff on August 17, 2004 07:34:25 PM Report
Absolutely beautiful, Jennifer. Congratulations on a great write.

Take care.......Sue
Comment By: FreeMelissa on August 17, 2004 02:09:33 PM Report
Great write. Congrats on the well deserved award.
Melissa
Comment By: PremiumBlake Hightdudis on August 16, 2004 06:58:09 PM Report
wonderful poem, congratulations on your ribbon.
Comment By: Freejoia on August 16, 2004 03:50:33 PM Report
Beautiful, lovely metaphors, imaginative and lovely to read. Congratulations on the bright blue ribbon, joia
Comment By: FreeBOB on August 16, 2004 02:17:32 PM Report
Congratulations on you Blue Ribbon Jennifer, a lovely write, Bob
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on August 16, 2004 01:23:15 PM Report
Awesome prose, Jennifer~
Congratulations on a well-deserved ribbon.....
Margaret..the old bag lady...
Comment By: FreeJeff on August 16, 2004 09:58:30 AM Report
Oh Jennifer, this poem is excellent.
Congratulations in it being noticed and rewarded.
Jeff
Comment By: FreeZenith Elliott on August 16, 2004 02:59:44 AM Report
Excellent poem, congratulations on the blue ribbon...~Z~
Comment By: FreeGay Johnson on August 16, 2004 12:08:51 AM Report
A wonderful write. Congratulations on the blue ribbon.
Gentle Dove
Comment By: FreeRichard Johnson on August 15, 2004 11:24:38 PM Report
Congratulations on the blue ribbon.
Thunder Wolf
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on August 13, 2004 04:14:22 AM Report
Excellent restoration...ahhh, the healing powers of love! *sigh*

Beautiful writing!

~Barbara~




 


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