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Author Name: Freespeak_soft 6 Comments
Date Added: May 27, 2003 01:05:35 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Freedom
This title may lead you to believe
That human rights apply to all husbands and wives,
But the title is there only to deceive
So that you won’t think about the cruelty in our lives.
 
It is true when they say, “life is unfair”;
I have experienced that many times through the years.
No one, except my family, has shown they care,
Which has caused me, in pain, to constantly shed my tears.
 
I have had very few friends in the past,
Which means I have always been on my own.
With me, relationships do not last;
It is like an episode of the “Twilight Zone”.
 
My parents and I have never gotten along;
They do everything possible to make my life a living hell.
They are always “right” and I am always “wrong”;
So that is why I feel like I am confined to living in a jail cell.
 
I know what I must do to get away from it all,
And to get the freedom that I have been searching for;
Talking to me will be like talking to a wall
 Because there is nothing for me to live for anymore.
Author's Notes:
3/7/03
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeS on August 30, 2004 12:12:27 PM Report
good poem
Comment By: Freepunkybrat on August 14, 2004 11:06:04 PM Report
very awesome......i feel d same way, but wat they always say "do it on their way" and David s right u just found ur freedom by expressing wat u feel in your poems!
Comment By: FreeSarah on July 13, 2004 03:22:08 AM Report
wonderful i give
it a perfect score .
Comment By: FreeMelissa Gantt on July 29, 2003 10:49:30 AM Report
I fell the same way with my parents but till God i felt all along. So your not along if you have God
Comment By: FreeDavid on June 7, 2003 04:07:20 AM Report
you've found your freedom...within your writing...let this be your escape...great job!
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on May 27, 2003 09:29:36 AM Report
You can live for yourself...you are #1! Get away and find freedom. Very heartfelt poem. Good work!




 


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