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Author Name: FreeLen 35 Comments
Date Added: August 24, 2004 18:08:47 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Carrousel World Waltz

Merry-go-round plays a carnival sound,
Calliope pipes on a warm, summer night.
Wood horses painted in course, garish colors,
All varnished, and sparkling, so bright

Wind's in our hair and we haven't a care.
Our steeds chase the breeze to our young heart's delight.
Calliope sings as we reach for the ring,
We hold on with all of our might.

The magic we shared at that late summer fair,
Lives in my heart like it happened today,
The memory of you as the girl I once knew,
Is a treasure I'll never replace.

The laughter of children as we pass them by,
Time and again on our carrousel ride,
Will always be calling me back to the time,
When love flowed like sweet summer wine

I still remember that early September
Diamond stars shine in the late summer sky
You were the girl of my carrousel world
Back in the days you were mine....

Author's Notes:
I would like to thank The Academy and all of the little people, like Ron Miller and Paul Walsh, The Sensuous Sorceress,Lady Dragonwyck, Barbara and, so many others, for writing crap all week,thereby, making this award possible for me
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumMerv on June 5, 2012 03:30:44 PM Report

Enjoyed reading and it brought back many great memories. The reward was deserved.  


Comment By: FreeGoliath Assassin on October 13, 2006 12:03:44 PM Report
Lol, don't be silly!  This poem was very heartfelt.  I think we all have that girl (or boy, for the girls) that we wished we'd have spent more time with, always wondering how things might have turned out.  One day, I'll be old enough to look back at childhood crushes and romances...  But until then, I'll leave that stuff to you, Dirt!
Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on May 5, 2006 02:14:37 AM Report
I really like this one Len, and congratulations on your blue ribbon. I know that I am late, but I wasn't here when you wrote it.
Damon
Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on January 4, 2006 05:57:51 AM Report
Hi Len, Stopped by to read your blue ribbons. This just went into my favorites. We have 5 carrousels in our area. Brings back so many memories of hanging out.
Comment By: FreeMichael Drivas on August 14, 2005 09:19:35 PM Report
Ok i was there! how did you do that.....LOL
Great just Great.I don't know what else to say.
Comment By: FreeJ on August 3, 2005 01:33:35 AM Report
A brilliantly written poem. I could hear all of your sounds. You went beyond the typical one sense (sight) poem and allow for hearing, touch, and a feeling of love. Great poem. Well deserving of the award.
Comment By: PremiumBruce A. Peaslee on September 14, 2004 07:03:41 PM Report
Len - The poem was great, congratulation on the award. The
About this Poem, was priceless, you are, in no uncertain
terms, hilarious.

---Poetrydad---
Comment By: FreeKaren Redd on September 2, 2004 09:23:12 AM Report
You take my mind back to the good old days, with a melancholy smile full of memories. Very very good poem, congratulations, you certainly deserved the award. Karen
Comment By: on September 2, 2004 12:20:16 AM Report
Fantastic poem..Congratulations on your Blue Ribbon Award.

~Tracie~
Comment By: FreeBOB on September 1, 2004 12:43:55 PM Report
Congratulations on your award and great poem, Had good laugh at your write up, :) Bob
Comment By: FreeTimespell on September 1, 2004 11:52:18 AM Report
Well Len~

I am glad my crappy poetry made you
reach greatness...lol
But honestly mate... Well done on your nice
blue ribbon poem...all the fun of the fair.!!
All the best.
:O)
~Timespell~
Comment By: FreeAndrew Lull on August 31, 2004 01:36:16 PM Report
My first comment was for the poem. This, however, is for your "About This Poem" remarks: LOL! The truth has been revealed! Cheers, cititzens, for our plan of writing crappy poetry has reached fruition! Len's got his award! We can all go back to writing much better crap than he's ever produced. :-P

...Joking, of course. I'll go back to writing good poetry. The rest of you, carry on. It's my turn!
Comment By: PremiumBlake Hightdudis on August 31, 2004 09:10:24 AM Report
Congrats on your ribbon.
Comment By: FreeJo on August 30, 2004 11:48:16 PM Report
Nice write. I love your descriptions. I also really liked your About section. Haha.

Great Job.
Congrats.
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on August 30, 2004 09:53:10 PM Report
By gosh, there IS a Santa Clause! LEN GOT A BLUE RIBBON! You're a hero to all of us who've tried and failed. I'm proud, len. Proud! And so happy for you. No matter what, they can't take that away from you. Can they? I know all those mentioned in your acceptance speech are gratified. LEN GOT A BLUE RIBBON! That would look good on a bumper sticker. I'd buy one. ML
Comment By: FreeSharon Jorcil James on August 30, 2004 09:29:53 PM Report
Nice romantic write and well deserving of the blue. Congrats are in order.

Sharon Jorcil-James
Comment By: TrialAnn on August 30, 2004 04:27:24 PM Report
Congratulations Len! You now have found the fame you so desired..:) Don't let it go to your head, I still like the raucous funny stuff. Don't quit on us!
Comment By: FreeHeike on August 30, 2004 04:15:07 PM Report
You did it, Len - next stop will be best original screenplay up in the Kodak Theatre. Go for it!
Congrats, ~Heike
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on August 30, 2004 12:35:41 PM Report
Hey, Dear Dumpster Man~!!! An award~!! Hey, they know talent when they see it, huh?....This is really romantic and fun~!.....Ain't Merry go Rounds, fun???
.....your Sally's Butterfly....
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on August 30, 2004 08:01:15 AM Report
Len: YEA!!!! Hooray!!! And another ride on the carrousel with the Blue Ribbon flying proud!!!!


Lady Dragonwyck thanks Len for his mentioning her in his About on this lovely BLUE RIBBON winner!!!!
Comment By: FreeGlata on August 30, 2004 07:23:47 AM Report
:D Congrats!!!! Hey....didn't I get a mention??
At long, long last, Len gets the award he so richly deserves! Lovely verse (grin)

Glata
Comment By: FreePaul Walsh on August 30, 2004 07:06:14 AM Report
You cheeky .................... but then I am glad me oul sausage ..... and slightly honoured in my own way ..........
Walshy
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on August 30, 2004 05:15:19 AM Report
Well shiver me timbers! Len gets the blue ribbon! good for you old fruit!
Comment By: FreeMarian Mason on August 30, 2004 04:33:41 AM Report
I love the acceptance speach Len its got me laughing as I attempt to type. A Blue Ribbon Len you have indeed made it - for this week at least. I love carrousel horses they are a happy memory of my childhood clinging onto the brightly painted horses as we sailed round and around Very well done and congratulations on your award
Marian
Comment By: Freejoia on August 30, 2004 01:33:34 AM Report
Leonard, you old rattlesnake, you just make me so proud, congrats, don't tie it to any peach trees...joia
Comment By: FreeRichard Johnson on August 29, 2004 11:53:06 PM Report
Hey what's your face, this is very nice. Congratulations on the blue ribbon.
Thunder Wolf
Comment By: FreeGay Johnson on August 29, 2004 10:29:17 PM Report
Like I said before len, a wonderful write. Congratulations on the blue ribbon
Gentle Dove
Comment By: FreeCandy on August 26, 2004 03:48:06 PM Report
very sweet!!

Candy:)
Comment By: FreeRichard Thomas Cummings on August 25, 2004 11:12:27 AM Report
Now now, we all know for the blue ribbon you have to write about god umpteen times. Why, this is such a dreamy romantic piece it makes my heart swell with overwhelming lust! *presses lips against the monitor* You rock my banana boat Lenski... much love, as always---your squeezy monkay!
Comment By: FreePaul Walsh on August 25, 2004 10:56:41 AM Report
Feck me have you gone soft in the 'ead, still chasing that DAMNED blue ribbon ...... it was nice wasn't it lads?
"Nice wordses," said Puck.
"Feckin shit," said Robin Goodfello'.
Robin have you been drinkin skunk juice again?
"Yes! Nice poem."
Thought that, stay away from skunk juice it plays havoc with your language ......
Walshy (wondering when we'll get the old Len back)

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 25, 2004 12:50:27 AM Report
RED EAGLE..
LOVE THIS YOUR JUST A CHEEZY GUY...WE WON'T TELL! SHE
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on August 24, 2004 11:50:52 PM Report
Len, I do love this. I'm so relieved to know you have some pleasant memories of the carnival. This is a good one. I love the merry-go-round. I love the calliope singing, the breeze in the hair, the horses chasing the breeze, the memory of love. I love the whole thing. ML
Comment By: FreeAndrew Lull on August 24, 2004 11:23:15 PM Report
My musical failings are legendary, but I could almost put this to music in my head. It must truly sing for others. And no, music won't be poetry part 2. I'm definitely dead to musical talent. I've tried.
Comment By: FreeGay Johnson on August 24, 2004 10:30:05 PM Report
len,(showing the softer side) this is a ownderful write. I love Our steeds chase the breeze...
Gentle Dove
Comment By: TrialAnn on August 24, 2004 10:14:45 PM Report
Is this the Len we know and love? You've been going to too many fairs at this time of year. It is lovely and shows that you can be the big cheese if you want to. (looks around to see if there are any super hero cars parked nearby) :)




 


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