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Author Name: Freepyrofungus 1 Comments
Date Added: August 25, 2004 22:08:20 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Category: Depression Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
I知 Drowning
I知 shutting down

I知 weaker than before

My eyes want to close

The urge to hurt myself went away

The feeling shot through my arms once again

My eyes start to open a little wider than before

The 吐eeling

It痴 back

Through my whole body

It now runs

My eyes became watery

Yet did not spill

They were stuck inside of me

Letting me drown with the negatives

Not sending me any sort of lifesaver

I slowly began to sink

In this impure blood from within

That cannot and will not bleed out

To make it more shallow

So I can stand

And stop sinking

For I cannot swim.
Author's Notes:
This is three of three about how I felt last night...Drowning in my tears and blood that weren't aloud out
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Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on August 25, 2004 11:22:17 PM Report
Dear Summer-
Sometimes the pain is so deep that it takes
a while to surface-
And when it does for you thank god that you
can release it into a poem of thought-
Life is like a roller coaster and it continually
goes up and down-
I know that doesn't help much but we must
remember that when its going down it is harder to see things that in any other situation would make us smile-
Does that make sense-
The beauty of life is still there it is just
harder to see in the darkness-
May your focus to find it when your in levels
of depression become stronger through your
writing-
This mental photograph you've painted described your emotions well and I hope it
helped you relieve some of your anguish-
Best Wishes to You~
Peace~
James




 


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